Right in the nostalgia, well done!
Right in the nostalgia, well done!
Thank you!
Tag it with lofi, cuz this is some good lofi.
thanks my bro
This is great!
Thank you!!
It's a big incoherent. I get that the theme might be about chaos. But it's a bit too random at points.
The church-organ sound is good, maybe a bit too low though.
You have some good parts, like at 01:17 and onwards, the feeling of chaos and impending doom is a nice touch.
The song doesn't end well, I suggest maybe slowing down the main "theme", and letting it fade away, like the sale was made and now something bad will happen.
I hope that helps :)
Ending extended, thanks for your review!
I like it, but I agree with some of the other critique; not really a "victory" piece. However, it has some motifs that resembles it, it feels more like it should be "pyrrhic victory" instead. There's been a great deal of losses, so much so that it's hardly a victory at all. But the beat is great, the strings work great and the trumpet part is the best part.
Thank you! Very helpful review! I honestly can't remember why I named it March of Victory, maybe a new name might be in order. Thanks again.
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