That's pretty cool! I like this a lot
That's pretty cool! I like this a lot
I like this.
I like this.
This is great!
Thank you!!
It's a big incoherent. I get that the theme might be about chaos. But it's a bit too random at points.
The church-organ sound is good, maybe a bit too low though.
You have some good parts, like at 01:17 and onwards, the feeling of chaos and impending doom is a nice touch.
The song doesn't end well, I suggest maybe slowing down the main "theme", and letting it fade away, like the sale was made and now something bad will happen.
I hope that helps :)
Ending extended, thanks for your review!
I like it, but I agree with some of the other critique; not really a "victory" piece. However, it has some motifs that resembles it, it feels more like it should be "pyrrhic victory" instead. There's been a great deal of losses, so much so that it's hardly a victory at all. But the beat is great, the strings work great and the trumpet part is the best part.
Thank you! Very helpful review! I honestly can't remember why I named it March of Victory, maybe a new name might be in order. Thanks again.
FYI, I changed my name from Shabbyjazz to my artist name "CielOuvert"
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